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Waiting

The sun had fallen behind the hills,
Falling to Hell,
Shrouded once more.
In the shadows of loneliness.

Clouds filled the sky,
With plumes of black,
Bleeding harshly,
Dripping,
Dripping,
Dripping through the heart.

The blood cascaded,
falling over the face,
sapping the whiteness,
Leaving,
Leaving,
Leaving the black.

It didn't falter,
It didn't stop,
When a bandage was placed,
It slid off like water through fingers.
Dying,
Dying,
Dying was the heart and soul.

But the sun began to show once more,
beams of light,
breaking through the shadow,
Shining,
Shining,
Shining on love.

As I watch it happen,
Before my eyes,
I stand here waiting.
Waiting,
Wauting,
Waiting to see the sunrise.







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This is how I felt today when I found out a special somebody's e-mail. I don't know if he likes me...but I now am nearly 100% sure I know his e-mail. Hehehe...

Is anyone else as hoplessly romantic?

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  • DeathByFault
    May 24, 2008
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    err it.

  • DeathByFault
    May 24, 2008

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    the sunrise ahh the light that beats out all shadow like the love that beats out all pain i too would love to see that day and stand here waiting as do you....dispite the fact that it was over 40 lines long it flowed by so fast like that instant your with someone special and time passes all by 5 hours feels like 10 minutes...great and inspiration...i loved i