The flowering trees
with their petals dancing
swaying lightly in the breeze
every flower enhancing
The precious leaves
staying in place
all the bees
collecting nectar with hace
Flowers creating little fruit
animals enjoying delicious food
never is there a brute
flowers that are always in a mood
Trees give us a lot
that will never rot
Author notes
A sonnet i had to make for a class
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest for KIDS ... Write about trees. Prewrites invited... by Melodies.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Good rhyming poem this is
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Well, this is an amazing poem, most certainly! You have worked hard on the rhyming and if trees could talk they'd say "WOW! COOL!"
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Nice poem Seasonings!I
ed it
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This is good!! You have some excellent rhymes in here, and some nice thoughts to ponder on. Good luck in your contest
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Break a Leg!
Nice! I hope you got an A+!
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