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revealed

I reveal to you my pain...my sorrow
I put my life on display
I show you my pretty, silver razor
I unmask the insanity that is me
I let you watch as I put that razor into my skin and slice it up
You stare as the blood pours out and drips to the group
You find me disturbing, but I dont care
My clothes are stained red
I unveil my scars...they tell a story
I point out my flaws
You look but dont say much
My story tells you that I go through this same pattern everyday
Do not shed a tear for this makes me feel alive
Im tired of feeling nothingness, empty
I uncover the suppressed depression
I simply show you...me 

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  • Christina-is-crazy
    June 18, 2008

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    WOw,
    i really like this poem,
    its amazing,
    i love poems like this,
    problably because im also a cutter,
    but its a great poem,
    Thanks for entering my contest
    Good luck
    ♥ Christina


  • Play-A-War
    May 26, 2008

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    Well i can pretty much say a lot of that is true for me as well. Not nice but hey cant be helped... It's good [=


  • XBrittniX
    May 26, 2008
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    this is awesome u shuld check out some of mine, i thnk u will like them


  • CharcoalScreams
    May 24, 2008

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    Not sure if "nothingness" is a word lol but it works. This write is some-what like my poem 'worthless'. We kinda have the same writing style by putting a killer ending line, I wuv it!

    Sammie xox


  • XNevermindX
    May 24, 2008

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    Amazingly written, but really dark in a very personal way, but something in it is so relatable, making it soo good, in a dark way.

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