Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Hope (from within the gates of hell)

Wake to cold crisp air

wash yourself in dew's soft glaze

as it covers you,

form thoughts in your head to bring

yourself from the near end


Author notes

My 'Happy' Poem!

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Samplette gold member
    September 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I can see the "Hope" not so much the "from within the gates of hell" A good little write though. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • Shya
    June 21, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    A poem that says a lot in spite of its shortness and simplicity. Line 2 is my favorite line. Thank you for entering. A refreshing read.