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Looms

Heart threads its loom of life

with a panoply of plumes in passion's hues,

quilted reveries in Quixotic threads

meticulously knitted together with melancholy's yawn

and love's satin stitches.

 

Restraint's thimble shields against

pricks from compulsion's needle.

Memories calluses harden conviction's palms,

but soul softens the pain

by wearing faith's moisturize lotion.

 

In the sunset of one's hours

the tapestry of toil

is hung upon the mind's wall.

Images woven into its mantle

created from the vivid excerpts

of one's rationale diary.

 

Hoping the ebbing light of epiphany

shall reveal more patches

where the time spent darning

all the mars of moments

left more warmth than regret

and one sleeps under a conscience's comforter

feeling it more composed of serenity's soft layers

than guilt's scratchy long underwear.

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Prompt - weaving

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    May 25, 2008

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    Oh what a tapestry of language woven into such wonder...I love love love the ending.......great job!


  • FransB gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    So wonderfully

    'stitched' together - the images flow through the mind with sincerity of thought. You have succeeded in painting human journey. There is kindness, love and understanding as if in the knowing. You create a safeness for those that read this poem. The action of veawing is profound and caring. I am glad that I stopped over my friend. Frans

  • Judith Chandler
    May 24, 2008

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    I like the way you have used mostly sewing words and imagery. Sewing -- such a nice, comforting thing. Just one question: is it "pericopes" or "periscopes" (It's the Typo Police on patrol!)


    • penman gold member
      May 24, 2008
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      A pericope is a term used to mean an extract from a book.