Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Shards In Her Eyes

SHARDS IN HER EYES

In the briefest of glittering glances
I spy the shards in her eyes.

Crystalline inclusions in the ice-blue iris;
vitreous splinters
rip-reflecting, slash-refracting;
scatter spitting pyrotechnic slivers
of shattered psychic spectra
shredded sensations
and scattered semblances
of sybaritic reality.

Amid the debris of these clinical incisions:
reflected? Yes; refracted? Yes
I perceive a passing glimpse
of reconstructed ancient cruelties
past born and present pressed
into servile slavery.
Her intent is cut glass clear.

In that mere second’s glance,
less any scintillating second chance,
there were shards in her eyes

and one of them was me.

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • chills
    July 24, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    You are sharp

    as ever you were. I love what you write but I think we might hate each other!! x

  • zochit2me gold member
    May 30, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Interesting poem with some nice tongue twisting alliteration in it.

    Thank you for entering and best of luck

    Becky