When bounds branch into forth space,
vibration from the volume
find open paths to spread.
Which is why an open flame
is truly what I dread.
Some sinks drain away the water.
Some drain away the sand.
I absorb the heat into me
so I'm easily burned.
Author notes
hmm
that doesn't make any sence
a 4 dimension being would present less surface area to exposure
since most of the mass lies outside the third dimension
I'm not sure
A contest entry
- Spark by zochit2me.
1375 points, ended June 12, 2008, 10 entries
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typically the fourth (not forth) dimension in physics is considered time, four dimensional space is the three dimensions (H x W x L) plus time...
i think you are correct that this doesn't make any sense...
is english your first language?, if not then it's probably just a translation thing... -
I absorb the heat and so I'm easily panned. Seems like it's been awhile since you posted, roasted. Get going, man.
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Kindly explain.
The poem is lovely. Why you use forth.
Your notes I see them now. '4 dimension' refer to what?.
I think no need for forth and volume (Third dimension need not be explained).
Anyway you are good.
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As I read other comments now.
The fourth dimension is Time.
Thanks for your lovely poem. -
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If observed across time,
I waking human would stretch into what would look like a caterpillar
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time seem to work
but the concept was with the idea of a forth spatial dimension
the spider is imaginary
a super hero character of mine
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Hmmmmmmm
Pondering this poem...
Thank you for entering and best of luck
Becky
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maybe the spider's not 4 dimentional?
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this one is
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maybe it's not in the sink, then?
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theories beyond 3 spatial dimensions are hard to test
my current visions suggest such the being would absorb heat easily -
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well, they're hard to explain, anyway!
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