I want to die
So say goodbye
No turning back
I walk this road
All alone
I need no help,
Fine by myself
My razor friend,
At it again
My dry face no more
As tears drip
Drop
To the floor
Someone opens the door
It's too late now..
Cricket
Cricket...
No sound
Author notes
honesty?
emotional-wreck
A contest entry
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they way you write and style your poems Is what I find Very interesting
no stanzas, but how you post the words, hleps the poem pop!
I liked this poem. it was kind of like anrriating a letter
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thanks for entering
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Whoa!
There was some serious emotion behind this piece.
Kinda sad because if it's true you are cutting you should seek out some help like asking for some advice on what to do and if you're not and if this is just a poem like i do just write to be writting then "WOW" very deep, dark , and depressing.
Nice write!
Thanks for entering and good luck.
-Mandi
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its neat i like it keep up the good work...nice ending good luck
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This is very good!
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As tears drip
Drop
To the floor
love thatline.. love how you wrote it....
the poem overall is exactly how i used to feel.
you'll get through this... many bad times to come... but look forward to the good ones -
Perfect
wow I like it!! -
Sad
This is a great expression of how you were feeling. Lying to yourself that you are fine when deep down the depression has taken over. This is a deep poem I can relate to.
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OMG... this is so sad. And really good details. Great write. But I hope you aren't cuttin yourself. If you are, I just want you to talk to someone. You don't even have to tell. Just talk about whats bothering you.
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I really liked it especailly just how it flowed. It had great emotion in it good luck
XOXO
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