If you looked at her wrists youd see the love
If you looked at her legs youd see the pain
If you looked at her eyes you could feel tears
If you could here her speak you can tell she has to restrain
If you looked at his wrists youd see the love
If you looked at his legs youd see the pain
If you looked at his eyes you could feel the tears
If you could hear him speak you can tell she struck a vein
But they are both to stubborn to tell each other
How the feel and long for one another
So they are doomed to have these questions and scars
Doomed to think they must love from afar
So who will get to the noose first
Who will finally pull the trigger
Maybe it'll be a tie a tie for suicide
Everyone thought they were bigger
Bigger than killing themselves for the one they love
Bigger than life bigger than these obstacles
But they were wrong again of course
The only way theyd be bigger is if they knew each others feelings
But now its to late we have to get ready
Where our best suit and tie or dress
To this funeral to see these kids lay at rest
Because they thought they failed loves test!!
Author notes
So yeah this just kinda came to me after each word it might not flow to you but in my brain it did. So yeah there ya go hope you like it.
A contest entry
- BLOOD STAINED TEARS (SUICIDAL LOVE) by Candy Morphine.
300 points, ended June 11, 2008, 42 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Watcha think dudes
Comments
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Bravo
I can also see why you're a finalist....mesmorizing...good luck in the contest. -
listen,
i dont care if it flows. and btw it does for me.
this is so excellently written.
like it?
i LOVE it.
this reflects my state of mind so much!!!.
after i'v commented on the poems in this contest im going to go through and read all your poems.
once again this is an amazing write,
well done and all the best for the contest!
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