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Set Free

We've been friends now for two whole years
And through those years my feelings grew
I've been in love with you so long
And the sad part is you never knew

Instead you ignored my feelings
Maybe you never suspected
But now I've told you everything
I don't know what I expected

I love you, and I miss you so
And I never got the chance to say
How I felt about you and why
Before you had to move away

And to my surprise you called me
My heart stopped when I heard you speak
The voice I'd been longing to hear
The voice that made me feel so weak

But you had another surprise
You told me that you had found her
The one you wanted to be with
And about her you were so sure

I wanted so badly to cry
It's like you slapped me in the face
You called to tell me you wanted her
That I could never take her place

But she's the one who makes you glad
And even though she isn't me
I'm glad to know that you are loved
And that now I have been set free

Author notes

The song that I used was Taylor Swift's 'Teardrops On My Guitar'. Parts of this might sound cliche but you know what, it's how I felt so deal with it.

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  • Technicolor
    May 24, 2008

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    Wow. I like the emotional release that happens when you read this. I can totally relate, probably because everyone's been through this before.

    I need to download that song. Thanks for reminding me.


    GOOD LUCK!