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A CHANGE OF VIEW tanka sequence









You and I walking
our footprints in the wet sand
laughing together
the wind whirls in your hair
as you gather lost sea shell

One by one we make
designs with abandoned shells
making this moment
one that we will remember
with crude letters "I love you."

Seeing you different
within your wondrous orbs
secret unfolded.
I draw you into my arms
till your heart beats within mine.







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  • thats sweet, it tells a wonderful story.
    the message is powerful and yet gentle [if that makes any sense] ^^ thank you very much for entering and good luck!
  • Seashells collected upon the sans, writing crude letters I love you into it. Seeing each new day with one another...that is love, and all that it contains in simple letters formed upon the sand. ~Sie