CHOROUS
Would you mind if I stand tall
and look you in the eye
and tell you that its never
no its not,it's not goodbye
would you let my eyes speak to your heart
just like they used to do
before we ever stood like now
where tears are facing you.
VERSE 1
This girl.this boy
one love ,one life
no anger, no sadness,no hunger,nor strife
the need be known
we now are grown
let the final twilight fall
we once were lost but now are found
now known the destiny call.
REPEAT CHOROUS
VERSE 2
The road is long
we once were lost
a differnt path
a bigger cost
yet now we meet
through passing yrs
remembering love
the trial,the tears.
REPEAT CHOROUS
VERSE 3
Could this be true
could it ever be
yes me with you
and you with me
let's park our hearts
one final time
no more roads
no mountains to climb
lets just hold on
lets not let go
I still love you
and I need you to know.....
REOEAT CHOROUS
I still love you amd I need you to know...mmmmm
A contest entry
- Write me Lyrics by Bryan-CarnelianHope.
800 points, ended June 25, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow the wording was smooth and easy to read. You can tell the emotions in this song. I loved it!
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THAT WAS REALLY GOOD. GOOD LUCK!
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EVER SO LOVING AND BEAUTIFUL!!!
One should never let go of their friends as they are our strength and hope.
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Fantastic
A really good entry, thank you! I can litterally HEAR the song. Thanks so much for entering!
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This is great
Your style and the words you have chosen are truly wonderful keep up the good work and good luck in the contest
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