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A Thought






There’s not too much to love
except this feeling
that encompasses all
and can change
the way I breathe.
The way my heart beats.








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  • Pollycheck silver member
    May 25

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. Very much was said in this poem with so few words. Great Write.

  • Nature Song silver member
    May 24

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    Not too much in a song can change, just the way I breathe...the way me heart beats for you! Now this is soft and so loving...a tender moment when shared by two! ~Sie