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~Perfection~

Snow glacier sculptures
reach into baby blue skies of cotton.
Aspiring splendorous altitudes,
mammoth in magnitude.

Nestled serenity bowing down
to billowy white perfection.
Tranquil waters partner,
creating natures masterpiece.
Brushes adding hue's of green
textured swirls, transpiring vegetation,
picturesque.

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  • Kazytc
    October 7, 2008

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    Wow this is totally sensational!

    This took myh breath away, wow, what a fabulously poetically graphic poem, fabulous descriptives and so beautifully and exquisiteley penned to poetic perfection, with such artistry and depth of emotion and appreciation for the wondrous beauty of nature too.
    Love your fabulous way with words too....

    Snow glacier sculptures
    reach into baby blue skies of cotton.

    Nestled serenity bowing down
    to billowy white perfection.

    Wow these are phenomenal expressives, stunning and sensational and for sure you are Poet Laureate standard, hope you are in print, if not you sure should be with poems like these, what a sensational write and read!
    Love it, well done fantastic, Bravo! Write on and hey... never stop writing either! You are brilliant.

    Best of luck in all your contests hope you win Gold in them all and with poems like this you well deserve to, no wonder this won Gold! Wow!

    Poetic Hugs,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xxxx


  • penman gold member
    June 6, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such an amazing creation for the picture. Congratulations on the gold.


  • Roaddog Wolf
    June 6, 2008
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    Cery nicely penned piece you have penned here, enjoyed the read, good write


  • Lexie
    May 24, 2008
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    this poem is very peaceful an djust relaxes the mind. it matched the photo very well. good poem.