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Naked Truth

spoken spaces of scented emotion

slow dance in shadows

behind sequences of chosen stars

 

ripples of rain slide gently across skin

 

- quenching

 

misconstrued conceptions

of painted private language

illuminated by essence

- pressed between naked

 

 

 

 

 

5/24/08 

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Prompt: Naked

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    some very nice alliteration to open this lovely piece...

    i really like the closing line, "pressed between naked"

    very nice use of the word...


    fine entry, thanks so much

    al