The shameless couple wrap themselves in greeneness,
Pushing hard against boned cages,
squashing to its own animal beatings
Love me, Love I, Love me.
A victimless bull fight
beneath stained washes.
green, brown and living mix with her hair
The core deep within, but does he even care?
Do they care who watches?
the biggest insult.
Wormed embraces
and murderous phone calls.
I watch,
unaware myself.
but i see, witness in the earth.
my fist holding on for balance.
I see my own figure worth.
Does the mixed rhthym and pace work?
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Welcome to Allpoetry!
I thought this was good, the pace is good, but some of the rhyming didn't work out. I really liked this piece though. Wonderful write, keep it up!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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