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I Need Love

From the first time I say you
There was something in your eyes
A playful glint
A happy surprise
But there was damage to be done
And I am sorry
I know I've never won

I need love
My heart is bleeding
I need love
And I'm not succeeding
I need love
But low is my breathing
I need love
And your eyes tell nothing

There's no denying
That I've been trying
To capture every single glance you make
I need that smile
Its been awhile
Since everything has gone my way
and thats all it takes...

Can you tell
That my love for you is strong
Can you see
That I'm the only one you'll need
Do you know
Do you know I'm there for you everyday?

I need love.

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  • tink-a-belle
    May 29, 2008

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    aw... this is really good. I get what your saying. we all need love, and its sad knowing that someone we love just cant love us back for whatever the reason being.


  • XNevermindX
    May 28, 2008

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    Awww, this is sad, so sad, because i know how it feels. Hope somewhere in this screwed up world you find someone that loves you just as much, if not more than you love them.


  • Nakatrea
    May 24, 2008

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    wow this is really well done Eden. It would make for a good song. Thats actually what i thought it was. but some people don't write author's notes... so.. no its ok. I loved it and you write amazing things. keep it up my oh so sister like friend lol