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our silver chain anchoring me to you
alas, reality Over time
but still remains untarnished |
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt (not a quickie) Come see! by Lucy..
1000 points, ended June 1, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Awesome imagery, I agree. I really like the style of this poem. Great write, grea job
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what awesome imagery...I really enjoyed this poem and your style is very unique. i like your line breaks, and your font and font color...it's like a coral color..or like sand. It really makes this piece shine
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Wow, I love the imagery! I can definitely relate to this. As usual I love your formatting. Great job. :-)
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I like this. . .thanks for sharing
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wow!
stunning! i love this! i like your style of writing, the structure and the flow was simply amazing! the picture above just contributes to the perfection of this poem! >.< great job!
keep penning!
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Very good
I like yur style and the depth your pice portrays
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I love how you cleverly used the different aspects of the picture here, incorporating the rusted anchor with the still silver chain. A very creative take! Thank you for your entry.
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This is simply awesome!!!! Stunning!!!!
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Thanks
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Wow darl..I love it...you took the pic and have created so much from it...theres such emotion coming from your piece and I like how its structered it still flowed so well
I hope you do well with this, it's a winner in my eyes
Cin
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nice take on the prompt! i didnt even notice the chains were un-touched and not rusted like the anchor itself! way to catch that Very strong poem and love the feeling of hope still at the end. Best of Luck!
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Nice - enjoyed the grounding of the chain, the weighing down, and the bond remaining, hope.
Marlene
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