A kiss was just a kiss until you kissed me
since then my feet have been off the ground.
It was so good I almost had to pee.
A kiss was just a kiss until you kissed me.
So this wacky love is what it will be.
Sensation of your lips made my heart pound.
A kiss was just a kiss until you kissed me.
Since then my feet have been off the ground.
In a list
A contest entry
- Feathery Kisses. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended June 3, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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"It was so good I almost had to pee" You made me chuckle when I read those words. I like the form but as Soulful Woman said... I have not tried to do one either. Good luck with this one Juls
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I remember a kiss like this...only I didnt have to pee..lol Some kisses are hard to forget..
Very nice form..I like Triolet's, even though I have not tried them.
Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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