I hadn't cried over you
In nearly three damn days
But then you had to fuck it up
By looking so goddamn beautiful today
I tried to go and talk to you
But you kept pushing me away.
So what right do I have to stay?
You are free of my chains
You are better off all alone
You are happier without me
You will not cry by the hands
Of another man like me...
I hadn't spoken to you
In nearly four damn days
But then I had to fuck it up
By begging you to please come back to me
I begged as hard as I could do
But you said "Will you please behave!"
I guess I have no right to stay!
You are free of my chains
You are better off all alone
You are happier without me
You will not cry by the hands
Of another man like me...
Author notes
I was dumped by the first girl I ever loved on the 15th of May 2008. She tells me that I did nothing wrong, but I miss her so much, and its so hard to co-exist with her now.
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- >>Inlove & Alone by Lislaine.
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I know exactly where you are coming from on this. Im really soryr. I know what this feels like more than i`d like to....
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aww this is horrible. if she loved you then she wouldnt treat bad, it is very hard to fall in love and then see that person and wishing that they were still yours. im going through the same thing now. but i have learned these past few weeks to just let him be. because he says i was a whore and stuff and that he didnt want me no more. but the truth is that i was too good for him and you were too good for her. if she made you feel this way then she wasnt worth it
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Awe. Im so sorry this happened to you. This poem is amazing.Have someone you truly love leave you isn't fun. I know what it fells like and it suck ass! If you ever need someone to talk to just know im all ways here for you.
~Katiexoxoxo
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Nice, thank you for entering my contest ...I hope you had fun. liked it.
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