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Wilderness

As I gaze upon the crisp clean light.

On the remnants of snow that were left overnight.

After all this time I finally feel peace of mind.

Serenity of this kind is at last mine.

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  • Olivias Violin
    July 7, 2008
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    Very Good!


  • Kari gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    I love this kind of serenity and it is something that everyone should experience in life.
    The only thing that kind of bothered me a little bit was the lower case i instead of I in it. Other then that I really enjoyed this piece

    Kari