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What I Want When I Make Love to You









I want you to be my pedagogue
when it comes to making love to you.

Show me the touch
that brings to you
orgasms in the night.

Show me
the degree of dedication
it’s going to take

Tell me those inner secrets
with slight hints
that I listen for.

Test me
with the moan of your voice
when sweet spots
have been over ran
by my warmth.

I want to make you want me
like a pancake wants to be soaked
by syrup.

Like a desert dry and dusty
needs the rain to bloom.

Like a burgeoning flower
needs the sun.

That is what I want to be for you
Take my hand and my heart
and show me how.

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments


  • azlyn gold member
    May 24
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    Sensual delight!!! Lovely in all ways!

    Az


  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    May 24

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    oooooooooooo awwwwwwwwwwww both sweet and senual.... great write... thanks for sharing and gooood luck in contest..!!!!!!!!

  • CinfullyDelicious
    May 24

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    I think I will have to look up pedagogue, never heard that before..I really like this

    I like all the imagery in the sets of lines aat the end part etc...except --
    I want to make you want me
    like a pancake wants to be soaked
    by syrup.


    that kinda doesnt blend well like the others , seems off to me, but coudl just be me of course

    You need to please label put catergory in as adult on this poem, due to its nature etc..it shouldnt be allowed for innocent eyes to fall upon it if you label it they wont be able too

    Thank you for your wonderful take on the picture
    Good luck


    Cindy