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Surrender

 

A dark delicious promise for the night

She's every dream for every man and more

She knows for her submission will be right

And tingles with the thoughts of what's in store

 

A soft seductive look to draw me in

She teases me to tempt a tender touch

I want to feel the softness of her skin

A touch that she's desiring just as much

 

She meekly comes to sit upon my knee

And asks to please me any way she can

Her servitude tonight will set her free

To give away control to just one man

 

In normal life she cannot play this game

Surrender means there isn't any shame

 

 

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To the picture prompt, Geisha by Ladymorgana

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  • Tory says:

    nice. thanks alot.

  • Yep, pretty good. Not your most elegant stroke, but a good, honest boundary.

    "Good effort, I thought."

  • Papagallo
    May 24

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    Such beautiful sensious words and what a picture. The words were what deams are made of. It all sent my heart racing. May u be reconized in the contest.

  • wow.... another great write here...... thanks for the images hehe..... thanks for sharing and goood luck in contest!!!!!!!!!1

  • Dalaney gold member
    May 24

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    something is in the water around here...everyone is feeling a little freaky these days
    You, Sir, can certainly write some steamy poetry. Love, Lane

  • I love thisJeff, cept for one thing, the font is a bit large sort of distracted me a little

    but not a lot lol...a dark delicious promise for the night, what an opener

    but I like the sensual too, a soft seductive look to draw me in

    Veyr well written , gave more then justice to the picture, thank you so much
    Good luck


    Cindy

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