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A Boy In Love

A boy in love, and his money,
Are parted, before you can tell,
Me the reason, for the feelings,
That I know not, how to quell.

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Just a single stanza to express the thought. I understand quell is archaic; but it fits!

Wrote it about 2-3 months ago.


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boy loves girl
girl works behind the counter
boy hands over money to purchase stuff
boy forgets to take stuff

If you can sing it, tell me about it.

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