Sweetest sorrow and sharpest pain
Never shall we meet again
When we first met we did not know
That there would come a time to go
I never thought that I would lose
The finest friend that I could choose
I do not think I can be whole
Now I've lost my friend and soul.
A contest entry
- Goodbye by Brooklynn-X-Tainted.
1000 points, ended May 25, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
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awww...we met cause i was randomly giving out 100 points right??? tehehe...awww...i love this one...especially the last line
"now ive lost my friend and soul"...thank you for this... -
thanks for entering the contest this is really good. good luck
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you will find your friend again jeff..good luck in the contest..xxx
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Tory says:
wtf..
you have her...
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Short but very much to the point-
xxx Hilly
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amazing write. and i love your play on words in the very last line.
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