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Lost soul

Standing at the crossroads
Five minutes to midnight
Wanting to sell my soul
But no one is in sight

Minutes slowly tick by
The time is finally here
A train slowly rolls along
And a man in black appears

The man presents a paper
And puts a pen in my hand
"Want to sell your soul?"
"what are your demands?"

Fortune, fame, and Jessica Alba
I want at any cost
The price is of no consern
Even if my soul will be lost

He places an X for me to sign
But try as I might
Something must be wrong
For the pen will not write

The man looked at me and smiled
"You belong in hell"
"The pen will not write
Because you have no soul to sell"

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  • new light
    February 11

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    " The man looked at me and smiled
    "You belong in hell"
    "The pen will not write
    Because you have no soul to sell" "

    hahaha i like it
    good one


  • SuicidalLover
    May 27, 2008

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    Oh...Harsh! A great write. You gave me what I want and I thank you for it.
    ~Kystal Angel


  • syst3m gh05t
    May 26, 2008
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    this is an awesome poem great job