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The Window sill

Sitting on my window sill.
(It used to be ours)

Remember?

We sat in the rain all day,
Waiting on the rainbow.

Remember us sitting on the window sill?

That night your blood was spilt.

How was I supposed to know he had a gun?

Now I'm sitting on our window sill,
By your blood,

Waiting on the gunman
To come back for me.

Author notes

it was really short, then it was really long, i hope i got it just right!

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  • libithina
    May 26, 2008
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    Seem to have hit the prompt with this!! very well done!! s and *love


  • tainfinite
    May 24, 2008
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    taiinfinite

    this was a powerfull write, and a unique option on the prompt, weel done