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One Bittersweet July

You left me standing here alone
One bittersweet July.
Rain poured down from heaven
As you spoke that damned goodbye.

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These 20 word limits are pulling out some good work!

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  • Tattboyspet
    May 26, 2008

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    goodbyes are horrendous things aren't they?! ~frown~
    lovely 20 words with a hint of anger there to top it all off


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 24, 2008
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    So bittersweetly sad and truly expressive... x