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Yellow River

A yellow river flows
From the base
Of my imagination
Racing between the banks
Of of my denial.
Flow, river, flow.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 24, 2008
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    Wow, beautiful take on the prompt! Good luck in the contest


  • maralisa silver member
    May 24, 2008

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    A yellow river flows
    From the base
    Of my imagination
    Racing between the banks wow this is a great take on the promt good luck in the contest


  • Weltt
    May 24, 2008
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    Simple, yet creative! well done and best of luck in the contest!!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 24, 2008
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    Very creative indeed!.. x