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awash

spewing forth
morals of self indulgence
that none dare question
to become the sewage
at the bottom
of humanity's ocean

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  • Cat
    May 31, 2008

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    i like that you took the idea of raw and created a metaphor with it. - I wasn't looking for anyone to even use the picture in an ecological way- but you turned it into an entirely different metaphor which i have to give you kudos for.

    thanks so much for entering

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  • aaaaaaaa
    May 27, 2008

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    Nice, I think this is so true. Most of the morality that people have is just a facade that they hide their true nature and life behind.


  • sheltered
    May 24, 2008
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