You,
just
you
hold
my
heart
Dee Garner May 23,2008
Author notes
Option #6. Six word, six, lines, six syllables
A contest entry
- Options Ten by Partners In Crime.
900 points, ended May 26, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh this is so heartfelt and the restrictions of the contest certainly didn't take away from the feelings and emotions that come through in this.
Congratulations on the HM
Gaylene
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ah so much said with so little words, but they flourish and flower passion and truth from the heart.
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I love this poem It speaks so loud with so few words Good luck in the contest
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Outstanding!
Six stunning and powerful words that everyone should hear!
Lovely penning and very creative in its presentation!!
All my best to you in the contest!!
Linda
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Oh how I wish it were true for me..lol. The sentiments sweetly say it all. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Dear Dee, They most certainly are six very important words anyone would love to hear.
Love Joan
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OOOOHH
You get bonus points
I like it, awesome job. You will get 50 bonus points for giving me a six line, six syllable, six word poem.
P.S.(it was option six
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Tammy -
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okay I changed it to option #6, I was going to do option #5 but it turned out to be a very personal poem that I didn't feel I wanted to enter in a contest
I guess #5 was still on my mind
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Best six-syllable poem have ever read--good luck in the contest!
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Six words any fellow worth his salt would want to hear. And words we all hopefully get to say...except maybe to a doctor. Six words/syllables/lines would not be easy..."I want the gold cup ...NOW!" Would be mine.
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Lovely Dee, says so much in few words holds priceless meaning. ♥
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