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i love you more than love itself

i love you more than love itself...
thats what caught me,
took hold of my heart,
let me fly away.
those seven words,
locked inside my heart,
my head,
and to keep there forever,
and forever there to stay.
you have hold of my heart,
and i pray and pray you use it wisely,
not to your advantage like the others,
but to show me that you care.

i love you more than love itself...
catchy,
isnt it?
i cant stop repeating it in my head,
like a song...
or a rhythm,
or a beat of a heart.
those seven words,
are all mine to hold onto,
and i smile,
and even brag a little,
because someone i love that much,
loves me the same back.


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  • woahhmikky
    June 5, 2008

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    Aww.
    Reeciee
    This is pretty cute.
    and happy.

    Damn you and your ability to write happy things.

    Oh well..

    ily/

    Mikky,


    • Cerbie20
      June 5, 2008
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      lol yeah... i wrote this poem about josh. we were talking one day and he was like, how much do you love me? and i was like, a lot... a lot a lot. and then he was like, really? i love you more than love itself... prolly told sam the same thing

      • Merciful-Manner
        June 6, 2008
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        i never told Sam that. Only you,I could never love Sam. She and I have been broke up for a long time. She cheated on me a while ago. Said I wasnt worth loving, So she loved someone else. I have been single for a months now. My heart has been waiting for the right girl someone i could trust. You are who I trust and give my heart completley to,my love, my eyes, my touch,my passion,and my word! It all is yours entirely,and only yours, You my daily smile. The one i miss as the sun misses the flower on a rainy day. I love you, or shall I say I love you more than love its self because I really do!


  • HerbalGoat
    May 25, 2008

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    This is night, truly, but, the phrase is only seven words, not eight, however the phrase is eight syllables long.

  • Merciful-Manner
    May 24, 2008
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    wow

    Wonder who said that to you

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