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Christmas Saved

Old Santa Claus
Was at a loss
Christmas eve was here
Couldn't find reindeer
There was no snow
Couldn't make sled go
Got himself in a stew
Said what will I do?

Then missus Claus
Without a pause
Said ride with me
In my red S.U.V
It will be pleasant
Hold lots of present
We'll have much fun
When I give it the gun

And away they did go
With honk,honk,ho ho.

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Billbard

Written December 24th, 2003

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  • Stardust100
    December 10, 2007
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    Well at least Christmas was saved.

    Great write x


  • Elvenfairy
    November 29, 2007

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    LOL, Santa riding arround in an SUV, oh man what a sight that would be! This was a great poem. Thanks for entering my contest! Merry christmas!!!!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 15, 2007

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    Awww, I'm glad to hear that in the end of the day everything turned out alright, after much loss and sorrow throughout the journey!


  • Parearoo
    December 7, 2004
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    LoL, this is a great poem!! I LOVE IT *heart* *heart* I hope you will always write these great poems!!
    (Oh, and thank-you for your comments on my poems.)
    Edited on Dec 07, 6:32 p.m. because ''.