Old Santa Claus
Was at a loss
Christmas eve was here
Couldn't find reindeer
There was no snow
Couldn't make sled go
Got himself in a stew
Said what will I do?
Then missus Claus
Without a pause
Said ride with me
In my red S.U.V
It will be pleasant
Hold lots of present
We'll have much fun
When I give it the gun
And away they did go
With honk,honk,ho ho.
Author notes
Billbard
Written December 24th, 2003
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A contest entry
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Well at least Christmas was saved.
Great write x -
LOL, Santa riding arround in an SUV, oh man what a sight that would be! This was a great poem. Thanks for entering my contest! Merry christmas!!!!
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Awww, I'm glad to hear that in the end of the day everything turned out alright, after much loss and sorrow throughout the journey!
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LoL, this is a great poem!! I LOVE IT *heart* *heart* I hope you will always write these great poems!!
(Oh, and thank-you for your comments on my poems.)
Edited on Dec 07, 6:32 p.m. because ''.




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