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A Summer Night's Wish

That summer night
after we broke up
we ate ice cream
and as I sat
you laid on me
as a blanket
chest first to my back
you seemed at peace
I wish I had broke your neck.

Author notes

6. Ice creams headaches from broken promises.

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  • penman gold member
    May 24, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done Best of luck in the contest.


  • KayJay
    May 24, 2008

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    Interesting twist on the prompt... and one many can identify with (LOL). Well done... Good luck in the contest..
    Ken