Me-I love being me when me is in control of me
When me becomes we, we are open to many possibilities,
both positive and negative equally.
Me cares and shelters my soul, but we acts careless and cold.
While living in we, we is still really thinking mostly about
me, subliminally.
When me has been beaten and bruised,
Me againlooks for we to be comforted and soothed.
When we feel comfortable and begin to open up, to
reveal the truth, once again we's been stuck.
Feeling mistreated, used, and abused
Me is strong, do you know what me does?
Me tries, we doesn't care.
Me cries, we multiplies me's tears.
Me sighes, yet we doesn't hear.
Well me clearly sees that we has no foundation in me,
So as hard as this may be, Wadu we!!!
It's time once again to start living for me,
be the best that I can be!
That comes with a money-back gaurantee, eternally
risk-free.
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Peaches this is great stuff you have done with some very excellent word play. I know the me in you, and the we that would love to take control over me.(you)
You are a stronger woman now and your words speak loud and real. Just keep your heart in view, and those beautiful six-seeds. I love you kid
...auntie
Nrver say Wadu to me...just aquene..or later
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I love the me-we concept you used here. While "me" is always a person unto itself, "we" can take on a persona of it's own, and become a seperate, different, person. This can be either good or bad, depending on the circumstances, for sometimes "me" can be worse than "we" or vice-versa.
Anyway, you created a very thoughtful write here; one that has given me pause to reflect about myself and my relationships with others.
You are an excellent writer, keep up the good work!
Brazos
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Thank you so much for your incouraging words.
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