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(My tongue wraped around yours)
pen away
in 5 words or LESS
your addiction
be seductive
serious
sad
or
whatever!
(the image used here is from sexygraphics.com, so please credit)
In a list
A contest entry
- A D D I C T I O N (Adults ONLY...Please) by Ephiphany.
800 points, ended May 23, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
Comments
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Say this was great
Liked the style and the short piece
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Wow, this is great!
I love the way that you put this one
together. Very creative work here.
Congratulations to you on your trophy!
Jeremy0826 -
Whoaaaaa this is smoking hot!!! Great job with the prompt. The words express the emotions not only physically but what it mentally is portraying.
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Very nice. You certainly have away with visual poetry. I had not read poems like this from you before. I have gone pack to your page and begun to read some of your older work.
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Whoa!! Sexy as!!!! I love this.... my goodness!!! Passionate
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Ohhhh yummy! I love the hot, sexy, romantic thoughts spreading around the page here. This certainly has a fire all of its own. Good luck in the contest!
♥ Touchof1der -
love is an addition too and beautifully expressed here
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very clever and creative with the presentation of this short piece. So much said in only 5 words. Goodluck!!!
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This is amazing =] Good luck in the contest!
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unimaginably creative.
good job.
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oooooh yes why didn't i think of that! lol love it!
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Love the flow here
and the layout is wonderful. Great job and good luck to you in the contest,
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