A weeping angel sits,
Alone on her cloud.
She's drowning in her sorrow,
As her crystal tears fall.
A man below, looks into the sky,
Watching the moon as it drifts by.
He hears a melody,
Soft, sweet, and bitter,
And he cannot help, but to weep along.
The clouds dissolve,
And a light shines.
From the heavens,
Comes a white glow.
The darkness parts;
The silence grows.
All is quiet,
And nothing stirs.
Another haunting melody begins...
As the world and the angels sing together.
Author notes
Kiku.nee.chan.
Option 5:
.angel
.drowning
.sorrow
.silence
.moon
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Option 6:
Feeling The Pain
"Venom of a thousand needles"
Quote: [Option 13]
‘She walked to a rhythm – all that week there had been singing in her ears, summer songs of ardent skies and wild shade, and with his arrival the singing had become so loud she could have joined in with it.’ – F. Scott Fitzgerald, ‘Tender is the Night’
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Very sad and solemn, yet interesting.
Thank you for entering and best of luck goes to you!
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thanks so much for entering.
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I think that you did a great job with this congratulations on your trophy win best wishes always be well.
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I can't find the words to describe my awe with this!
This is an outstanding piece in any form! There's like a silent melody that hums along with the words that just makes it uncabable of being described! You've earned a lot of respect from me for this one! Simply amazing, my friend!
Blessed be!
~Winter~
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WoW! You have left me speechless. This was just so beautiful and full of emotions! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this!!
Thank you SO SO SO much for entering!!
Good luck! ♥
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Wow..this is an emotion and great poem!
I really like it!
Good Luck in the contest!
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