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I Ache for You

Drinking my morning coffee
I ache for your voice
To talk to me.

At lunch, I ache
For your beautiful face
Across from my lonely plate.

Walking down the street,
I ache for you
So I don’t walk alone.

Each day
I want to hear
Your footsteps next to mine.

In bed,
I ache for your body
And your lovely breasts to linger over me.
To lie next to me,
Rub my back
Or make love.

I miss your lips,
Your tongue
Your parted thighs
And staring at your nakedness.

Yet I cannot touch you.

So why do I wish for you so fiercely?

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Mylee

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  • movedon
    November 6, 2008

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    Thank you for reading the authors notes. I know EXACTLY who wrote this I love this. It fits me perfectly in my situation, and really is all about what I'm feeling right now. The last sentence sent chills down my spine. Thanks for taking the time to enter, and best of luck!

    ing alone,
    Mylee


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    June 16, 2008

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    To ache for that for which we can not have is a fierce ache indeed...your words touch the heart and leave the soul to bleed...


  • movedon
    May 23, 2008
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    oh wow....who is this about? it was beautiful

    Mylee