[ steely wings surfing ]

steely wings surfing
round eyes ready to pierce prey
through columns of air

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EAGLE HIAKU by Swan song. 1000 points, ended May 31, 19 entries
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judyjudyjudy
May 26

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Nice to see what I think of a as a "real" haiku. I like the way you have worded this and the image of the eagle piercing prey.

Good luck in the contest.
- crimsondew
  May 26
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  Thank you very much Judith!
james119
May 24

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This is strong... great imagery... perfect wording.

I am impressed, (as I am with your other work).
- crimsondew
  May 24
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  Thank you so much for your kind words!
kiwigirljacks
May 23

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You Haikus are always so great hun! Captures the essence of the eagle
- crimsondew
  May 24
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  Thanks dear for your lovely compliment!
Swan song
May 23
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Very well done thank you for entering
mcheadle
May 23
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That is about
how these birds work. They are smelly birds also....mac
- crimsondew
  May 23
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  Thanks for that bit of information...niceo f your to stop by!
Rhyming From Rehab
May 23

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oh sissy...this is a strong haiku...could feel the strength of the flight...loved it! best to you in the contest ~ Trisha~
- crimsondew
  May 23
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  Thanks a lot Trisha...many