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I Want You.


I want you here.

I want you near.

To wash away,

all my fears.

To feel your kiss.

To feel your touch.

I want to be with you,

oh so much.

I want your arms

around me tight.

To be with you

all through the night.

To feel your pain.

To feel your warmth.

Standing outside

in the rain.

To hear you whisper

I love you so.

But I know,

these words

I'll never know.

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  • daydreamercate
    June 4, 2008
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    nice emotion here, i liked the way it flowed too. I can relate to this poem. well done


  • cleanbyHISblood
    May 27, 2008
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    umm.. very boring... i only read the first 3 lines.. and i went dry.

    • Amandas Broken
      May 27, 2008
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      I don't really care what you think. You say you have self respect? If you have self respect you should know by know how to respect others as well. It seems you need a more growing up to do.


  • Lislaine
    May 24, 2008

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    Yay

    Waw beautiful! very nice written, I loved it... keep on going! dont give up on feelings Hopie you had fun, and GOOD luck in my contest...


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    May 24, 2008
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    These wants are great emotions. Now just make them
    happen. A great take from the prompt!

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