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The House that Rolled its Eyes

No matter how often I:

pace
hum
sing
pet the family cat

none of this is as sweet as it would be with you.

A contest entry

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  • peridotPixi
    May 23, 2008

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    thank you for the entry this poem is really touching and deep and you said it all in so few words, and it reminds me of the small little things that suck being alone, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, -Amy