Mummy mummy mummy
You are the best
I will love you forever
You're better than the rest
You’re the sunshine
The sunshine of my day
I love you like crazy
More and more each day
I love our special cuddles
And the time you spend with me
You’re my special mum
And I know that you love me
Author notes
This is my first poem.I hope you like it mum
A contest entry
- Pre writes galore! by Lady Michaella.
850 points, ended July 16, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything You Want :) Enter Please :) by fairytalelovestory.
550 points, ended September 29, 2008, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Im sure your mom was really happy when you showed this to her. You did a really good job you must love her alot
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this is very sweet M-F-P.(magikal fairy poet). i'm sure your mom enjoyed this!!! it's very sweet.
-slick99(s-9-9 or s-99)
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Great
A gret tribute to your Mum and I'm sure you make her very proud!! You are talented, beautiful and someday--
Many Many years from now, You will be a great Mum too>
Well written and great rhyme! Well Done!
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that is so sweet and so beautiful!! Your mummy must love you very much and u definitely must love her!! The rhyming is great and there is a good even flow! Thanks for entering, and good luck
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Beautiful!! I know your Mum must have been so very touched to read this poem. What a loving daughter you are! This rhymes very well and your word choice is perfect.
So glad I read this one, it's simply lovely.
Lucy
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This is so sweet and loving, what a nice poem to write about your Mum. I can tell she is a very special Mum with a very special daughter
Dee
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very sweet...excellent job
Smile (-:-)
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This is full of admiration and such a special write for your mum. I am sure she knows how much she means to you, and you to her. Hold onto that special relationship...it is only one a mother and daugher can share. Beautiful work.
Storm
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this poem is good, its a nice poem for your mom, i wish my son would write a poem like that for me, i like the flow and the rhyme -Amy (nathan's mom ) and nathan8
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Sounds like you have a great mother. You have given her a great tribute here.
Your poem is very nicely done.
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I like your poem alot your mommy sounds kind and loving I like cuddles wirh my mommy too have a nice day
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Your Mum would love this I bet! You really show your love for her in this poem. Good work Georgia!
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excellent
Awwww very nice Sun-angel. I can tell your mom loves this poem. You are a blessing in her life. This is quite extraordinary for a first poem. I hope you'll write many more. Welcome to AP and thanks for sharing this. Well done.
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Great job. Welcome to AP. Your mom writes poetry very well. I can see that you take after her. Congratulations on your first poem.
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Welcome To Allpoetry
Hello sun-angel,
This was such a wonderful write.. It's so full of love for your mother.. and for your first poem it was written very well!! your mother is one special lady 
I hope to read a lot more beautiful poetry from you!! I can see that you are going to grow into a very talented poet...
If you ever have any questions about the site just contact me or any other Site Greeter.
Keep up the great work!!!
Jetleena
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Aww.. thats so sweet and very well written.
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This is a beautiful poem, and it's so nice that for your first poem, you wrote about your mother with so much love.
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This is just beautiful Georgia...great rhyming. Thank you so much sweet girl. I love you very much too.
Hugs, Mum
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I love you too and your comment.
You are the best mum.
Love Georgia
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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