Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Crimson Devil

The racing crimson rivers that run through your body call to me
Singing to the beat of your pulse they beckon.
The crimson devil within you tempts my soul.
it softly whispers my name as my teeth lengthen.
Sharp as needles they graze the inside of my lips,
the monster within me comes to joyful life.
I fight with my two sides as the monster sruggles to break free.
Holding you softly in my arms alone is torture.
the beat of your pulse races against my skin where our bodies touch
your soft, warm breath whispers against my chest
using all my self control i slowly let you pull your face away from my chest
my arms regretfully release your waist, keeping only your hand in mine
The monster inside me retreats along with my fangs
what humanity i have left keeps me from pulling you into my arms again
the monster within purrs happily at the feeling of you pulse against my palm.
the beat of the crimson devil calling out to its one and only master.


Author notes

this may sound weird but this poem and my other one Crimson Sky were both inspired when my friend, trying to get rid of my hiccups asked me what color blood was lol. random i know XD

Option 5:

"Cut out my eyes so I can't see this cruel world hates me"

xXCrimson TearsXx

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 23, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Great poem i liked it alot its very well written with emotion great job. I loved it alot. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • littulstarpup
    May 24, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    lmfao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats too funny for authors note. I love you emma!!! glad i could help. and this poem is amazing