A deep crimson puddle stains the carpet
The smell of gunpowder lingers heavily in the air
the gun you took your life with lies in the palm of your hand
the shattered windows let in a warm summer breeze
facedown on the carpet your warm blood flows slowly down your face
unsatisfied with your life, you ended your pain
If only i had come sooner
Oh how i wish i was there a mere minute earlier
perhaps i could've prevented your death
If only i had shared my love for you sooner
as the tears run openly down my face
i walk over to your lifeless body and collapse
weeping over you i lift tht gun form your cold hand
placing it against my head i pull the trigger
the searing bullet races through my brain
and my world explodes as i join you in death,
my one and only true love.
Author notes
this may sound weird but this poem and my other one Crimson Devil were both inspired when my friend, trying to get rid of my hiccups asked me what color blood was lol. random i know XD
Option 5:
"Cut out my eyes so I can't see this cruel world hates me"
xXCrimson TearsXx
A contest entry
- What do you think? {options} by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
300 points, ended July 23, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Suicide Solution by Blood Magick.
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GOOD thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
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Shelly -
i love his one too. It has so much meaning to it. She didn't give him the love he wanted and when it was to late for her to tell him he killed himself.
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