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For the Renovation

I want to be in your life more than just an instant

More than just a shadow

Something more than an eagerness

I want to be inside of you an indelible mark

A constant memory and a single truth

I want to beat in your prayers with fear of abandment

Be in everything and for everything, a completion of you

An infinite thirst of caresses and kisses

But not a habit of having you near me

I want to be in your life a pain of absence

A shame of distance

An eternal friendship

Something more than an image

Something more than a dream that defeating paths

Comes

Passes, and goes. 

I want to be the tear in your eyes 

In your lips the laughter

I want to be your end and your beginnning

Your darkness and your light

Your earth and your sky

Your life and your death 

I want to be

The same as what you have come to be in my life. 

Author notes

This is a simple love poem from the heart. It may have some "cliches" in it... but hey what can I say if that's how everyone feels when they are in love. Of course I could have described it in a different way. >_>'' just not in the mood right now. But oh well... enjoy. =]

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  • willowprincess
    May 27, 2008

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    very good. it is a bit cliche' but i think you used them well. they are cliche's for a reason and you managed them beautifully.

    "I want to be the tear in your eyes
    In your lips the laughter
    I want to be your end and your beginnning
    Your darkness and your light
    Your earth and your sky
    Your life and your death"

    that is a perfect description of what it means to be in love.