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THE PANGS OF SILENCE double triolet

Caught in silence of this desperation
Spinning wild from echoes in my head.
I sense my sanity's desecration
caught in silence of this desperation
feeling my inner disintegration.
I toss and turn on boundaries of my bed.
Caught in silence of this desperation
spinning wild from echoes in my head.

Within silence of hot burning flames
they lick emotions singing my poor heart.
There is pain from demons making false claims
within silence of hit burning flames.
Crushed  by the burdens of many cast blames.
How sharp the cruelty that life can impart.
Within silence of hot burning flames
they lick emotions singing my poor heart.

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  • crimsondew silver member
    May 23

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    Crushed by the burdens of many cast blames.

    Beautiful line and a wonderful triolet on the quote....Quite creative!Love it!
    All the best!


  • OrangeMarmalade silver member
    May 23

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    Very Interesting

    You've well captured the theme of desperation, and the reflection that has on the individual from society in the second stanza. Well Done! Best of luck in the contest!