Your favorite color
wrapped around my body
and heart.
Warm deep within
while you're gone.
In a list
A contest entry
- prompt... by Gypsy-Princess.
400 points, ended May 23, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful love poem! Like the visual "green blanket wrapped around body and heart" and then the last stanza that "wraps" the poem "deep within!" Good luck in the contest!
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Beautiful imagery and words my dear friend. I absolutely loved this entry and best of luck to you in the contest.
-BossLady
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This is quite lovely and speaks softly to your reader... x
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speaks...
done with eloquence not just fifteen words
there's a few indications that frame the fervor. I loved the reorientation from direct current involvement to one of influence and filling in with that, with understandable transition of line three perhaps.
this conveys so much stronger than my estimation with prompt I changed my mind by, I walk without arms when wind's swinging enough but you give conducting of compensation package so much nicer. we do want tangible commitment even colatteral per se on calling, way childhood's also soothed to recognize a mother's cloth if preoccupied is set at adjustment for comfort not just extension.
delightful decision to enter,
babies are my subject
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Something left behind that reminds us when they are near. Can be a color or an object...wonderfully crafted in so few words! ~Sie
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Aww....this is so touching! went straight to heart!
All the best!
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oh, wow, this was an amazing read, especially because my favorite color happens to be green. 
The last stanza was beautiful and a perfect ending.
~Cassie
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