Dear raymond i dont want to die
I feel alone and want to cry
Your love is my only guide
Help me as i say goodbye
I love you more than yesterday
Be strong for me as i slip away
It hurts to see the pain in your eyes
To watch you cry to hear you sigh
Promise me you will love again
Dont moarn me long as i can see
Love someone and they will love you too
I see the angels their wings of gold
There waving their hands they want me to go
Each breath i take its all for you
The angels are beautiful how well they sing
Goodbye my love my everything
Author notes
felt very sad writing this
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checked in to recipricate, and glad I did
This is a truly heartfelt piece. One has no trouble seeing the angst. The tug of eternity and the desire to help a loved one hold tension. A nice write.
james
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Thanks Evelyn... I can feel the pain as I read this work. Emotional and quite a moving piece. Thanks again for writing.
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A very good, and heartfelt piece. It is a rare glimpse into a strong person. One able to accept reality, and death, yet still willing to admit needing help letting go. A welcome addition.
Thank you for your entry.
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