stars are beautiful
and so also their schedule to look up
after focusing through sunshine
for love to come to ripe action
risk of mold, but neon making
is not taking us past seventy
winks of recognizing
who makes new wanting us non toxic;
rest under him though thyroid or desires
need steering clear goitrogens, puffs
variously: via essense of predigested
instruction by core
caring consistenly channeled
food from mamma, maturity
after breast or womb bump
for no bumming or banging
like clock to work but celebrate
better than cliff of minutes
for welcome climb
from diurnal obligation
ream dream
more than indulgence ~
sunned tomato is for sauce and scab,
wilt cravings waiting until deficiency
like no flavoring that didn't flower
no empty water from dependency
as going off breast for never,
to not know fruiting way
and time is a means not me
Author notes
good luck is not grand aim; Isaiah 65:11
please comment without emoticons or applause symbol, I find them outlandish
though plant/animal types appear centered...
A contest entry
- a reminder of HIS control... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended June 5, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
not just a splash for lines
Comments
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Indeed this is thought provoking!
I will have to read it again, but i did understand some of it.
Great job,
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nice peek
xianariaslifetime thank you for the encouraging remarks
I'm glad my piece stimulated you for an interest towards bits of positive comprehension. It's a large topic that can't be lovely once overwhelming lol.
returning favor for you is on my day's list,
babies are my subject
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Humm..this is indeed a thought which provokes the instincts of the readers accepting the depth and the issues described so wonderfully..well done...
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