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Mysterious Tears

I cried today
Tears ran down my face
So I covered myself
No eyes stared
Just Cassy's
She asked why
I told her and sat there
Just staring
At the waxed, light-brown gym floor.

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  • Dont Lose THE ONE
    May 28, 2008

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    This makes me think of why you were crying??? Seriously. Those tears are mysterious. If you told her and all she did was stare at the gym floor it must have had a big effect on her!

  • Runner09
    May 23, 2008
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    I meant on line # 6 to say " I told her and 'she' sat there......